School Camp

 From Thursday to Friday last week we went on our school camp. We did many different fun activities there however my favourite part was catching Yabbies. Here is the Google Drawing I made on it.

Tree house

 We were given the task of creating a tree house for one of our class mates. First we all had to write a list of descriptive words to try to explain how we want the tree house to look. We were allowed to add things inside the treehouse. Here is the tree hosue I created for one of my class mates.

Diwali

 Diwali is a festival which focusses on coming together and family. It is celebrated over the course of 5 days. here is my explanation of it. I hope you enjoy.

The box has been opened

 Now that the box has been opened, we must convince the teacher what we want to do. The box had 2 options either we go to the movies or we go to the pool. I beilive that we should go to the pool, and here is why.

 To The Pool!

I firmly believe that room 6 should go the the aquatic paradise that is the greymouth pool, instead of the brain rotting movies or a game of wack a tiny ball with a stick! Did you know that swimming is one of the best ways to get fit? I think that we should go to the greymouth swimming pool because of these reasons: swimming is good for your health, the swimming pool has much more opportunity than any of the other options and because WE WILL GO ON STRIKE OTHERWISE!

The reason that I think we should go to the swimming pool is because it is healthy for you. We will be exercising the whole time that we are there! We will be getting fit and become more and more healthy by the minute. We will be burning of fat and will be having a great time while we do it! We will no longer be get tired quickly because we will have incredible endurance. You do want us to be fit and healthy don’t you? Instead of us being fat slow and unhealthy it that really what you want for us. If we were fat slow and unhealthy then we would always be late to class because of how slow we are, if we are at the back of the field then it will take us around 20 minutes to get back to class because of how fat and slow we might get if we don’t go swimming. Also ryan you could come along and you could get fit at the swimming pool with us!

The next reason that we should go to the swimming pool is that there is so much more options on what you could do! You could go play in the cold but big pool, or you could play in the nice warm but sallow pool. Then of course you could go on the extremely fun and extra awesome HYDRO SLIDES!! If you are in to diving then you could go to the deep pool and dive or pop manus or do pencils. Also in that wonderful deep pool there are big inflatables which you could hang out and talk on or you could jump around on or try to get everyone else of the inflatables rafts and these are just some of the options in one of the pools when there are two pools! Plus HYDRO SLIDES! For instance the hydro slides have many different options you could race your friends down or you could spin around on your way down! Next in the warm pool you could just relax inthe warm water or you could play volley ball! Ryan you could have so many choices if you came along with us but first you just have to make the right choice and try and tell Miss Wilson that we should go to the Greymouth swimming pool.

The final reason that I think you should let us go to the pool is because otherwise we will go on STRIKE. We will go on strike and not do any work until we go to the pool! We will vandalise many different things throughout the school, we will dig up the bike track and we will tear everything of the classroom walls. Also we will of course not complete ANY thing you want us to. We will be as loud as possible we will disturb other classrooms we will leave school grounds and riot all through the street! We will be as annoying as possible to as many people as possible people will be coming to the school complaining that all their door knobs are gone and they saw a bunch of kids with a drill running off! Thats right you heard me, we will go throughout ahaura and steal everyone door knobs! Still think we should watch a movie? Ryan, you should come with us you would be really great at stealing door knobs! You could even shut of peoples electricity.

In conclusion I believe we should go to greymouth swimming pool. I believe this because it is great for everyone's health, It has more opportunity than any of the other places, and if we don’t go the greymouth swimming pool then the swimming group will go on STRIKE. 

Persuasive writing

 There is a box in room 6 and we have to write a persuasive piece of writing to convince our teacher to open. I have three reasons why I beilive our teacher should open the box.

A mysterious red box lies still in room 6...

I strongly believe that the box should be opened! I have three strong paragraphs on why you should open the box: it would be fun to open the box, we will go on strike otherwise and it will motivate us to do more work.Bye the end of this pice of writing I will make sure you open that box! Don’t believe me? keep reading and I will prove you wrong, I Will persuade you to open that box.

First reason is that I believe that you want to open that box because whats the fun in just leaving the box closed whats fun about having a random box in the classroom just collecting dust. However if we open it which I think you want to do then it will be a nice surprise for the class. We will all have a nice surprise because I do believe that there is something good in that box. You don’t seem like the kind of person to prank the whole class, even after we did this piece of writing to try and convince you to open it. Because I think you want to open it.

Another reason that you should open that box is because if you don’t open the box then we will go on strike! If no one else is motivated then I will persuade the rest of the class to strike. We will not do any work until the box has been opened. Even after we have done this writing  if you refuse to open the box it will be an outrage. We will not complete any work until we have decided to open the box. Next we will turn to the side of vandalism the school building will be littered with all kinds of crude drawings and words do you really want that to happen? So you SHOULD open the box!!

Finally that box being opened will give us a little reward for this work we are completing, it will inspire us to do more things like this because we might get a reward once we have finished our writing. It will inspire us to put hard work into our pieces of writing. However if you don’t open that box many of us will will feel like we have done this writing for nothing. If you don’t open that box it could start a wave of a bunch of students not putting in their best work. It could start a wave of bare minimum work being completed. So you SHOULD ope the box

In conclusion you should open the box otherwise we will go on strike, and some students might not do their best work, AND to be fair whats the point of a gift if you don’t open it? This is why you should open the box, I recommend that you listen because don’t forget we can STRIKE!

100 words challenge again

 I enjoyed the first 100 word challenge that I did so I am back with another one. I have based this 100 word challenge of a different picture, I hope you enjoy it!

Through the forest I wander not knowing where to go nor where I came from. Just as I’m about to give up and sit down while I wait for help I hear a tiny voice say “follow meeeeee” alarmed I stand up quickly and look around, I see a tree. Something different though: the tree has a door in the side of it. I stumble of towards it hungry and tired. Inside the tree I see a bed and food. wearily I go inside watching everything suspiciously. I look back and see that door is gone “were are YOU going?”

100 word challenge

 The 100 word challenge is where we have to base our writing on a picture and then we have to write exactly 100 words telling a story around the picture. Here is mine hope you enjoy.!

The shadow was there the ghostly shadow was there. It was in the foggy trees standing perfectly still. Then just as quickly as she saw it, it disappeared. Pertrisha couldn’t help herself she had to know what that figure in the fog was! She looked around for any sign of the ghostly figure, then when she looked down the road again it was there, and it didn’t look like it had any intentions of moving. The figure was a still as a boulder in the middle of this lonely forest. Then to break the silence *crack*... “I see you there”.