Persuasive writing

 There is a box in room 6 and we have to write a persuasive piece of writing to convince our teacher to open. I have three reasons why I beilive our teacher should open the box.

A mysterious red box lies still in room 6...

I strongly believe that the box should be opened! I have three strong paragraphs on why you should open the box: it would be fun to open the box, we will go on strike otherwise and it will motivate us to do more work.Bye the end of this pice of writing I will make sure you open that box! Don’t believe me? keep reading and I will prove you wrong, I Will persuade you to open that box.

First reason is that I believe that you want to open that box because whats the fun in just leaving the box closed whats fun about having a random box in the classroom just collecting dust. However if we open it which I think you want to do then it will be a nice surprise for the class. We will all have a nice surprise because I do believe that there is something good in that box. You don’t seem like the kind of person to prank the whole class, even after we did this piece of writing to try and convince you to open it. Because I think you want to open it.

Another reason that you should open that box is because if you don’t open the box then we will go on strike! If no one else is motivated then I will persuade the rest of the class to strike. We will not do any work until the box has been opened. Even after we have done this writing  if you refuse to open the box it will be an outrage. We will not complete any work until we have decided to open the box. Next we will turn to the side of vandalism the school building will be littered with all kinds of crude drawings and words do you really want that to happen? So you SHOULD open the box!!

Finally that box being opened will give us a little reward for this work we are completing, it will inspire us to do more things like this because we might get a reward once we have finished our writing. It will inspire us to put hard work into our pieces of writing. However if you don’t open that box many of us will will feel like we have done this writing for nothing. If you don’t open that box it could start a wave of a bunch of students not putting in their best work. It could start a wave of bare minimum work being completed. So you SHOULD ope the box

In conclusion you should open the box otherwise we will go on strike, and some students might not do their best work, AND to be fair whats the point of a gift if you don’t open it? This is why you should open the box, I recommend that you listen because don’t forget we can STRIKE!