Hi Solly, you found a number of different adjectives that describe the castle and you displayed them clearly. Maybe you could briefly tell us what the story was about in your introduction. You could also draw the castle and write the words inside it and around it.
Hi Solly, it's Deakyn here. Your DLO seemed really interesting with all of the words describing the castle. How long did it take you to create this DLO and how long did it take you to think of those adjectives? It made me think of the castle itself when I read the adjectives. Maybe next time you could say the right thing at the end because you both said different things. Kind regards Deakyn
Hi Solly, you found a number of different adjectives that describe the castle and you displayed them clearly.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could briefly tell us what the story was about in your introduction. You could also draw the castle and write the words inside it and around it.
Hi Solly, it's Deakyn here. Your DLO seemed really interesting with all of the words describing the castle. How long did it take you to create this DLO and how long did it take you to think of those adjectives? It made me think of the castle itself when I read the adjectives. Maybe next time you could say the right thing at the end because you both said different things.
ReplyDeleteKind regards Deakyn