I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
I Liam here, I like all the information in the text, because it contains a lot of facts and it looks like you wrote it in your own words. Next time put capitals for the headings and for your name on the front page.Sincerely Liam.
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I Liam here, I like all the information in the text, because it contains a lot of facts and it looks like you wrote it in your own words. Next time put capitals for the headings and for your name on the front page.
ReplyDeleteSincerely Liam.