I have done an sma with Tane. It is about a serpent who makes a lot of destruction around the sea. we have been learning to make the characters move smoother when they are walking around. The serpent even disturbs a cow! Hope you enjoy my slide show.
Hi Solly, I enjoyed the images you used in this SMA, and I think you made the characters move very smoothly. I wonder if you could include some more dialogue, and give the viewer more time to read it. Do you know how to do that?
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Hi there! My name is Oscar from Manukau, Te Waka Ako, Waikowhai Primary School. You have made a brilliant animation. It reminded me of when me and two of my friends presented how to make a stop motion animation at New Windsor School. Have you considered telling us the storyline and giving us more time to read the speech bubbles. If you would like to see my learning my blog address http://wpsoscarc.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi Solly, Deakyn here from Awahono School. I really like your SMA. I watched the first one and I saw no mistakes. In this SMA I did see a few mistakes though. You never really said this was the second one because the title says "Serpent SMA." You could maybe next time make the big splashes and stuff a little longer like two or three slides. The speech bubbles are also only on one slide so I skipped right past the speech bubble. In my SMA's I usually make sure the speech bubbles are on three or two slides but mostly three. I will visit your blog some more and would like to see number three on your blog later on. I hope you can visit my blog too.
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Deakyn